Rate my game map

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#1

Hello developers recently I built a small landscape, I would like to know what you think and how I can improve barely I just started working with this kind of maps

Here is the link:World grass - Roblox

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#2

Lighting

I really like the realistic style lighting that you have added to the game, I think that it really fits with the whole nature asset and the terrain.

Water

Personally, I think that the water waves are moving too fast, so perhaps you could bring the wave speed down a bit.

Terrain

I love the way you used grass and different terrain materials in your map. But there is one place that seems a bit off, and it is that the grass is inside the water in one part as shown below.

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#3

I’d say that the map looks great!

What can improve:

  • The water is way too fast to look appealing.
  • The sun ray is too strong.
  • Sand “part” at the bottom of the water has an unwanted blending.

Keep up! :+1:

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#4

Thanks for your comment I will take your suggestions into account and correct the parts that got out of hand

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#5

I know that this lighting is perfect.

I’d trying lowering speed of water though because it looks a bit"rough" if that makes sense.

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#6

I’m surprised at the fact you say you’ve only just started working with terrain maps. It’s a very good start. I like how you’ve used the new grass to make the map more realistic.

I would suggest changing the speed of the water. It’s just way too fast for a small pond area. The second change is the lighting. It’s too bright if you have your in game graphic settings on max.

Overall though, keep up the good work!

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#7

Thank you very much for your comment I will take into account your suggestions to change the speed of water and lighting

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#8

the first thing I noticed when getting into the game was the color of the grass. this may be a personal preference, but the grass looked very neon and unrealistic. the water was also moving way too fast. i also noticed that some of the trees in the showcase were moving while others weren’t. i don’t know if you made those yourself, but it really takes you out of the showcase if you see some trees moving while others not. if you did make the trees that move, i really like that. it adds another sense of realism and movement to go along with the grass.

overall not a bad starting showcase! i think with a little more time dedicated to the terrain and some adjustments with color choice and you will have a solid showcase.

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#9

another thing i forgot to mention, the lighting is a bit extreme. again this may just be a personal preference, but i don’t like too dramatic sun flares in my games.

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#10

Thank you for your opinion if I am working on that I still do not finish the map if I will take into account your expectations and suggestions to continue working on the map

#11

The grass decoration does do that to water. The only real solution is to paint under the water with something not grass. I think Roblox Staff is going to make a solution, though.

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