heya devs from the devforum
I have recentlymade a game called, bacons party, bacons party 2 and work!
I want to see what you think about the game
Bacons party:
https://www.roblox.com/games/5527367986/Bacons-party-story
Bacons party 2:
https://www.roblox.com/games/5546397177/bacons-party-2-story
Work!:
https://www.roblox.com/games/5658029991/Work-story
I hope I have good feedback for my next game 
Cya
The first game is quite bad. The build is pretty low, not much effort put into it And the map look like you just took a camping game template and didnât work much on it.
And I see a lot of free models that make it very bad And the story makes no sense and itâs really short 
So to resume briefly, If it was to rate this game Iâd say 2/10.
But donât give up, if you get involved and work a lot on this game you should be able to make a good game.
The 2nd game, most of the review is same as the first game Much more free models and a faster walk gamepass of 200 robux for this game? I donât think anyone would buy it.
For the last one, the hub is much more worked, which is cool but still need some improvement. Good point, now there is music in party, which make it much more active. Also the âback to lobbyâ button doesnât work, may need to fix that. The building inside the map are quite simple and good here (I hope those are not free models 
) The story is quite more original from the 2 previous games.
In total, Iâd say, focus on only one story for the moment, work on it a lot, make sure to review everything to fix the small bugs and maybe youâll be able to make a very good story game.