Rate my gfx, I made for a friend

Keep in mind this is one of my first renders)

Hi! I made a gfx design for a friend of mine, mind giving feedback?
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The word SchwarzWalde will go away, just ignore it.
There is some grain effect, its suppposed to be there, its not low quality.
Is this good enough for a clothing group?

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This GFX looks really nice for a group logo, that’s why I said yes.

I only rated it a 6/10 because roblox has a really young audience. If a 7 year old saw the group, they would skip over it (since kids judge a book by its cover) because it looks to “old fashion” and it may not catch their eye as per say another group would catch their eye. That’s why I rated it a 6/10.

The tv :tv: looks a bit stretched out and distorted. I know it’s hard to fix that, but if you can, it would make it look much better. Also add a backround because just 1 avatar and a tan background doesn’t seem realistic. Maybe add trees or something tropic in the background so the character doesn’t seem bland. Here is a logo for a clothing group I’m starting up.


It’s really simple, but can catch your eye.

To answer your question, yes it is good enough. Just add more to it.

Good luck!

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Thank you very much for the detailed response, but I can’t do anything about the tv, and I might just render an entire scene where the characters sitting down at a news station, so it gives G-Eazy vibes. I don’t really care if the logo looks “old-fashion” because the ad will be bright to catch eyes and attention. :stuck_out_tongue: Thank you for your time!

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I can see the design you’re going for, but the TV looks very stretched along with the resolution isn’t the best.

Hi @SchwarzWalde! The font for your breaking news looks a little odd. In addition to this the red block on the top looks very small. (Didn’t really understand if you could change these, though).
For your actual gfx, I would say it looks great, though the background color looks a little too dark (I would recommend something slightly brighter).