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Spent 20 minutes on this. Please rate, this is pretty basic ngl. Its a German soldier walking down an alley.

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Correct me if I am wrong, but is that gun backwards?

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no its facing the right way. Barrel on top.

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Well, that man must be VERY strong to be holding a gun that big with one hand. You should have used the right hand to provide support

Actually, this is how people march with their guns in WW2 very often.

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It’s quite bland to be brutally honest. It’s a nice render, but it gets boring to look at. I think some editing using some filters would be able to add to it, like some fire effects or smoke; atmosphere essentially. A good site you could use is Photopea or photoshop if you have it.

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Why is the german soldier super happy…

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Well because he finally has (a pretty bad) job.

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True, this is mostly a render I don’t plan to use it. Thanks for the feedback!

I think it would look more realistic if that gun was tilted a little bit and if the arms aren’t completely straight.

Nice gfx!

My feedback is that it could be a bit brighter along with more effects and the pose is quite strange as the gun is almost through the entire arm.

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he should be holding the gun other way, he is not holding it, its just sort of… there on his arm, the posing isn’t great the character’s some body parts are too shiny and look like plastic the wall and map and stuff is unrealistic the lighting isin’t great the shadows don’t blend you can see parts of the leg you aren’t supposed to see, and yeah. doesn’t look realistic, and the face choice is questionable. and why are there not more people :question:

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recommendations: maybe add some rtx effects like a bit of blur, sunrays and not make it too bland and plain. (no hate just recommendations)

This isn’t realistic because the soldier is literally holding the gun by the trigger/trigger guard. He should be holding it by the butt of the gun. The wall behind is just a brick texture. Why is the soldier smiling? Isn’t this supposed to be during wartime?

Blur and sun rays are not RTX. By RTX I assume you mean raytracing? That would be a completely different thing than what you mentioned and would be somewhat overkill for a Roblox render.

The gun is held up right. True the lighting and sorts this is a test of renders.

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true about the gun, this is during 1938 so no war yet

yea i meant that im dum lol but yea at least add those

I’m not sure a soldier would hold a gun like that :joy:

But other than that it’s good.

It’s not very hard, since generally it rests on the rest of your arm (I need to get a bigger vocabulary) therefore it is quite easy.