Hi there! I’ve been building on roblox for 3 months now, and i got some experience as a builder, i worked with many talented programmers that thaught me to never give up and to always work harder and harder, and today i wanted to get some feedback on my work, so i can make myself even better and better.
You can view some of my previous work here : Low poly trees - Roblox
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Thanks for reading! 
Woah there, I thought this was #development-support:building-support, which category is intended for feedback on one’s build or asking for architectural assistance.
Portfolios are intended for getting attention for hire. Look at every other #public-collaboration:public-portfolios post and see what most posts consist of.
oh sorry, i’m new here and i didn’t notice…
Heh, we all make the mistake when we first join, no problem really! Transfer it to #public-collaboration:public-portfolios
But your work is good!
And welcome to devforum!
Thank you, but should i post this here or transfer it to #public-collaboration:public-portfolios ? because the guy above told me to put it here…
Pretty good. I personally like the houses. The style and color just makes them pop if you know what I mean.
Yeah thank you so much, this really cheers me up.
I think your fine this is building support.
Hello! You’re buildings are great. I came in to test the game and I only found one thing. There are no door-knobs on the doors. If it were me I would add some door-knobs. Other than that I think you have done a amazing job on the builds. Good Luck! 
Here is a picture of the door:
Thank you, your feedback really cheered me up, and i think you’re right it may look even better with a door-knob.
Haha, that’s great you’re cheered up! Yeah I do think the door-knob would make a great addition. Also, I just noticed that under the door there is a spot with no brick in place. I was wondering if that was going to be put under ground or if not, you should add a couple stairs to access the door. Good Job!
Oh, i didn’t even notice that lol, thank you for reminding me of it, and yeah i think it would be cool to move the door up a bit and make a couple of stairs to access the door, Thanks once again x)
No problem! Good luck with the builds !
Your builds looks very good, like all the different details you added to the house. And the colors looks very good, as well for the trees they look amazing! however here is a couple of things to add your builds…
My Suggestions
The houses look really decent however i did notice, that the door piece is the same material as the windows. I would recommend you change the door to a own material instead of making it just a glass door and you could add some. Stairs as seen below i believe you forgot to add some!!
The second houses is very. Decent put you should change the glass material! and add a different material to the door piece to look more better. As by looking at it it looks like you added another glass all around the house! i would suggest you add some rocks, bushes, flowers, ect. To the house itself also it looks like you add, a lot of windows on one house. As looking at different houses they don’t have to many windows. In the back of the house part!!
The “Porch roof” you added could look more detailed, as by looking at it. I see on the right side the part is not correctly centered on the part as showed, below i would suggest you fix that: And you could add some. Lights to the house and maybe lower down the roof a bit more…!
Overall, you have really done a great job with the trees they look really decent you could maybe add some rocks, flowers, grass, next to them. Keep up the good work!
Thank you so much for your feedback, it was really helpful, i’ve just noticed all the details that you talked about, this would definitely help a lot in the future. Thank you so much once again
Hey, welcome to the DevForum!
Feedback
For you being a builder for three months now, I’m impressed. As I started building, and came my 3rd month, I could barely put two bricks together.
Low poly is my favorite type of building design. It gives a smooth texture to all builds in my opinion. The colors you used are very vibrant. Very magestic and eye catching. The houses you made are very simple which make it great.
One thing I recommend is adding reflection to the windows, keep it the same color, but changing the reflection of the windows is nice.
For the trees, I like how they are all different colors. Each tree has it’s own category. Once again, simple and standard, perfect. Trees should need different sizes, some tall and some small.
Instead of adding a glass door, add something that fits a door type a style. It makes it look better. The windows and the door are the same color, which is ok, but not perfect.
Overall, everything is outstanding, trees, houses, mainly everything. If you used some of the ideas I gave you it will be better. I rate this a 7/10.
I’d give it a solid 5, which is great considering that you have only been building for 3 months, and it can take years to master 3D modeling. Some critiques are: the proportions on the houses are off, the color palette seems a little too saturated even for the low-poly style with some of the trees, some of the tree leaves are shaped too regularly, making them look unnatural.
I’d give you a 7.5, taking into account 3 months, and the level of detail, especially in the trees. For the houses, you might consider improving the doors, as they seem…odd, being so far from the ground. That might just be the distance of the view, but it might be helpful.
Yeah, thank you so much for your feedback it will help so much for sure. Thank you !
Thanks for the feedback
