Ready Player One trailer - FEEDBACK

Hi, I just decided it would be fun to make Wade’s trailer from Ready Player One in Roblox, and pretty much nobody has done it before. There’s not many pictures of this scene, but here is what I could come up with. Also here is the link to the game. Anything I should improve on?

(Also, IDK what use anyone would have for this but its up for sale if anyone interested)

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Change the avatar from r6 to r15. Give it more life, right now it looks like it doesnt have to do anything but sticking out his hand. Try to make a position where he may be running!

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If you have a look at Wade’s “room”, you can see that there are a lot more posters, newspapers and overall, a lot of junk, like his backpack.
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I suggest that you add these details to make it look more crowded and more like a dirty room.
Hope this helps! :+1:

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Ready Player On was a great book but the movie wasn’t that good, happy someone’s recreating it! :smile:

I suggest adding more life and detail to the room, you know windows and stuff.