Realistic Game Stalls

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#1

Here is a picture of one of the stalls i’ve been working on.

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It’s a realistic game. I would like to hear some feedback about this.

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#2

Awesome creation! The right wall looks empty, so try texturing that as well.

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#3

Do you have more pictures? It looks really good :wink:

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#4

I’m trying to keep to the other stuff a secret rn. :wink:

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#6

White wall I noticed looks not textured, so try texturing that. The build looks great though!

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#7

Unless you are trying to set a specific mood, I believe the alley needs a few more lighting elements. The structure is good already, but just needs to be spiced up. You’re aiming for a cyberpunk theme, if I’m not mistaken. They usually emphasize bright lighting elements, as with the examples below:

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Notice how differences in lighting diversity affects the atmosphere of the environment. The lights make the scene stand out more and stimulate vibrancy.

Studio is pretty limited when it comes to lighting, but you can try increasing the light spread of the signs or adding new dimmed ceiling lights to achieve the subtle effect below:

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Though these are just my opinions.

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#8

So have bright lighting then maybe add a bit of fog ey?

#9

I love the stall. It looks very nice and reminds me of gmod or half-life. The neon letters look nice with good colors and eye pleasing. I like the detail on the ceiling and looks like pipes going through. What you can do is add a little more detail to the floor. It looks plain compared the rest of the build. I like it and would love to see it ingame.

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#10

What floor material looks nice with it??

#11

I wouldn’t change the material but maybe add some details. Get some trash. Maybe some cans, floor stains, etc.

#12

I feel like it’s to plasticy. Should I make the floor concrete?

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#13

Quite, but moderately. Adjust it so that it fits the scene. It would be weird to have a lot of lights with those low ceilings.

I agree. Maybe you can try adding cracks or garbage bags. You can also try running cables along.

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#14

wow thats amazing! is that even roblox?

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#15

Yes it is! :smiley: 30 charsssss