Hello there developers of Devforum!
Hope you are having a great day/night!
Anyways, I am here to see if I can have a re-critique in a way? I took some of my suggestions from my old Critique and the fonts and reused them for products. If you would like to take any renders please credit me with fontzi at least :).
I think I have improved, but I want your guys’ opinion(s)! I am open for anything, nothing will really hurt my feelings or make me feel any way down if you point out the flaws, because that’s what I am somewhat mainly here for!
One thing I need to point out is the one with the orange jumpsuit person is cut off at the end, not sure why, but it’s an advertisement for an SCPF group!
These renders look very nice, great job! The first one is nice with the player showing that he isn’t messing around, holding a gun very sternly read to fire at somebody though the font might need a little more work.
Try to make the font more special and make it stand out, give it a wood feel or a old aged time.
Try adding a dropshadow to the character as well to make it stand out from the background. The gun is also cut off a little, try to make it fit in more with the logo.
The second one which I would presume is an ad for a game looks quite nice as well though it needs more expression and info about the game. Have the player fight other prisoners with maybe a gun to give express “Command the Facility” and to show that the game could be fun to play.
The 3rd and fourth render looks very nice and has some smooth bends and lighting.
Your character renders are amazing! The only thing I have to say is that in the ad, the watermark might look better a bit higher (depending on contrast).
Keep up the good work!
Yeah. It was just a quick render I did for a friend, they said to surprise them. I plan on giving more depth looks with future ones with a scared face or something.
So these are pretty above average, and great job. So for the 1st one, your character looks very rough and grunge like, I’m not sure if you were going for that, but it looks odd. The gun is also not textured.
Moving on, the ad looks pretty nice, however, I learned this just yesterday, using ONLY white light is very bland and boring. Try using colored lights and adding rim lights in order to spice up your lighting and make an overall better ad.
As for the character renders, they’re very basic (yes i know that’s the point), but lighting and posing is kinda bland.
As for the nature render, the grass has no reflection and just doesn’t feel like grass. The bark on the trees is black for whatever reason, and the leaves look unproportional, as if they were stretched on one axis.
Now, your renders aren’t bad, they just have some flaws.
TL;DR: Use colored lights, fix your trees and grass, learn better posing and lighting.
