So i recently posted a GFX here to hear feedback and i decided to remake the original and wanted to hear your thoughts on it.
The original:
The remake:
Also, huge credit to NeoLeaf, since he provided pretty in-depth feedback for the original GFX.
Honestly I like the first one, it really shows the person is outside looking, the newer one looks like the person is inside the store. In my opinion, first one is better. But the second walls look more realistic. And maybe add another person looking at it too? Also, don’t know if you noticed this;
The legs look detached from the torso. Which makes it looks weird.
Also giving him a pose won’t hurt, maybe him thinking? Like I him wondering if he should but it? Or maybe a pose of him being surprised, like “wow!!!”
The clothes and hands looks a tad off.
You improved a lot!
What I don’t like
The model for the shirt/pants isn’t really um, on the “baseplate”.
Also, the ripped jeans look weird.
Things I like
Besides those 2 things, this is a really nice GFX!
I liked how you changed the walls.
Keep up the good work!
It looks like a good improvement, though the Wall seems quite a little off at some spots. Apart from this, I like how you blurred in at the left, and the different shading. Nice work I’d say.
This is amazing work! My only recommendation would to be correct the shirt used because the hands seem kind of off in the grand scheme of things; otherwise, amazing graphic!
It looks good, but there is a few minor errors such as the torso for the character and the dummy not being on the stand.
I really like it otherwise.
Really good gfx, the only thing I don’t really like is the wall, it seems really flat
