I recently remade my first logo based upon some of the feedback I got last time. Let me know if it is better or worse, or other things I should change.
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I think the original is better than the remaster.
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How so? What did I do better in the first one?
Thing is, this isn’t really a logo, rather just some text with text stroke, and a slight bend. It’s still just text formatting, nothing very logo-y about it.
The main reason @CoolGuyBoiBruh might think that the first is better, is because it has a background with the text that would make it look like a logo more. I think you should follow the original as a template, and experiment with patterns on the background of the text, or even mini pictoarts (that you created!) around the text to make it more like a logo.
edit forgot to put this in, good job for the first logo though!
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The little blue thing that you add behind the Assassin and Simulator. I feel like the second logo, the colors do not match for me and looks bland. And like @Vyntrick said, this isn’t really a logo. It is more of a text.
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@Vyntrick @CoolGuyBoiBruh, I made a previous post about the first logo I made, people said I should remove the color in between the Assassin and Simulator. I am planning on adding a little knife icon there too. I am confused as to whether I should keep the color or not because of so many mixed opinions. I don’t know if you can see it but the white has more of a 3d effect too in the second one, where in the first one I gave the backgrounds of the words a 3d effect… Spent like 2 hours learning to do this. (First game logo) - #6 by worldwarbattle
That’s so cool!!! Nice logo!!!
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Only 2 people told you to do that, and they don’t really look like they’re artists. More so a builder, and scripter.
From a designer prospective, you should keep the background with the text, or put a pattern overlay.
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Ok, thank you for the feedback.
Thank you. I really appreciate it.
i think the remaster is better. Less outline, and more sleek.
and there’s nothing in the middle here. thats good too
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I was kind of going for that. With the remaster. The first one isn’t as bad as it looks. When I exported it, it became out in lower quality for some reason.