Renders - First time doing gun work

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#1

I’ve had blender installed for 5 days now, I thought I would try something new by creating GFXs/Renders.
Any feedback on how I could approve would be appreciate :wink:

MTF Render
MTF Render1185×1080 1.62 MB

Tactical Render
Tactical Render1248×1080 2.98 MB

Soldier Render
Soldier Render1920×1080 1.69 MB

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#2

These are amazing! I love how you added the smoke to the barrel of the gun. If I did have to give feedback it would probably be adding props to the third one. Apart from that, nice renders!

#3

that last background doesn’t fit in wit hroblox character theme.
renders and gun models are nice though.
and the clothes, especially helmet and goggles.

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#4

I don’t think so, he made it work with the last background. Of course, the style is different, but it looks good.

EXCUSE ME? EXCUSE ME? FOR HOW LONG? That’s CRAZY (unless you used some other software before but um yeah)

#5

Screen Shot 2021-03-23 at 5.03.12 PM
Screen Shot 2021-03-23 at 5.03.12 PM1382×776 1.06 MB

it is clear that that is a background and the style does NOT fit in well.
i would suggest using an actual map or something and having the far things as background