Hello Dev’s! This is my first post from this account. My old one is: @TrueHarmony_66
I made a Restaurant Icon for someone on Discord… Feedback is appreciated!!
- Exotic
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Ok, nice. The first thing that looked wrong was that you put very realistic props with a basic render and background. Second thing is that the lighting is off. nice job 7.5/10 
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hey!! here are some things to improve on:
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the dude’s head is not facing the girl properly whereas the girl’s head is completely facing the dude. this makes the entire thing look odd. he’s literally just staring into space lol
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inconsistency with the posing style is also an issue. you’ve barely moved my homie’s arms he looks like he’s in r6. make it more smooth similar to the way you did the girl. when you’re posing, imagine your characters are in the middle of moving, not static. you’ll get more dynamic poses this way.
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add more blur to the background. if you use photoshop i suggest using the iris blur (i think that’s what it’s called??) to make the person looking at the gfx focus more on the characters. it should blur the background as well as a bit of the table.
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since this is meant to be an icon, you should edit the game name into the gfx. i know you have it in the background but remember; icons appear smaller on the games page so you have to make the text as readable as possible.
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flying ketchup. bruh.
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shadows are inconsistent. the pizza has a shadow but the donuts and coffee does not?? if blender is being weird with the shadows i suggest moving the lighting source and rendering again, then editing the shadow onto the stuff.
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choose a nicer angle. rotate the scene, anything works. having the camera look straight-on at the characters is a little boring.
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neon objects with colour should always affect the lighting!! make them emit a coloured light, not just white. it makes no sense that you have yellow hanging lights and pink in the back yet the scene only has a default light colour.
other than that this is really cute!! keep up the good work!!
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Hello there my friend, The pizza looks very good, so does all the food. But the characters do need some work. Let me give you some tips.
When creating renders like this, you want to make sure the avatars match the vibe of the background. The girls character is fine, but the boys character doesn’t look the best. I recommend changing the face, using face models from AltiWyres Face Pack. Purple + black + white doesn’t match very well.
And the food seems to realistic for the basic roblox characters.
Also, try fixing the lightning. It needs some work.
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This looks extremely good! I did notice something off with the food and suggest trying to add less realistic items as it will help out some. Otherwise good job.
Wow. I love it. God job. Keep up the good work!
Much obliged! I’m glad that you liked it!! :))
The guy’s pose is a little stiff, but the pizza render looks amazing!