Restraunt Feedback

Hello!

I just completed a restraunt build (my best so far!) and was hoping to gain a few bits of feedback before possibly selling.
What do you think is a reasonable price?
How can this build improve?
Contact me here or at Dusk#3953, (I will take offers for sales, if youre interested, but I am not confirming that it will be sold.)

Restraunt viewing - Roblox

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It’s spelled as “Restaurant” not “Restraunt”

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Didnt even notice, it is pretty late and I’ve stayed up working on this for awhile.

The engineering of the building is unrealistic, it needs supports. Also, design wise it needs work. For example, this piece between tables is useless, unless you add some functionality or decoration to it. image

Other than that, the interior looks blocky. I don’t know if this is intentional though.

Overall, it’s something that can be used, despite lacking a few aspects.

The wood on the top floor was a bit glitchy, I think it needs a bit more decoration on the interior but it’s quite good.

No, not a free model. I have pictures of my progress aswell. The name was put there because it looked plain without something there. Its from a text plugin.

Overall, it seems good, but when you sit on the chair, you’re in the table. I feel like the chairs and tables take away from the build. Also in the kitchen, I’m not sure what those things are but it looks like bread. Anyways, I noticed that there is a wall texture on the bread.

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To be honest with you, It is a good build but it is very dark and plain. As a builder, you should look into making your builds more colorful and more light etc.

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The overall design of your build is nice!! However, there’s plenty of glitches within the parts so I’d recommend going back through and trying to fix them. There’s some dark patches as well which you should play around with lighting more and possibly some of the camera options of adding saturation etc. Further more I’d play around with textures more on table and chairs and the scaling of it as well.

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