Revamp of my simulator! (OPINIONS) it isn't done

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#1

here is my map before i revamped it, first of all the first map was too detailed.
here is the before…

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as you can see, it didn’t look good enough
ad here is after, it is not done so yeah.
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i haven’t been replying for a while cause of school and stuff, but yeah! any opinions would be great!
thanks and have a great day!

  • sorry the first image is blurred, its glitched
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#2

Added Gems!

  • It puts more life into the game.

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#3

The map is good! Just not a very original game idea (simulator), there are hundreds with the same purpose and mechanics.