Hi everyone!!
I would like to show you my first obby I created, the builds in it is kinda simple.
Here’s the game below:
Everything is done by myself except the two palm trees.
Leave me a reply on what improvements should be made into it.
Thanks!
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Great obby so far, but after I fell down on the second stage, the ladder doesn’t let me up all the way:
The top rung in jutting out.
I recommend having a death-checkpoint system which will be much faster if someone fails on a stage. Right now, if we fail right at the end, we have to walk all the way to the ladder which takes a long time with the current walk speed.
Fun obby though, hopefully you can fix that so that I can get further in!
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Yes, I understand that, I just wanna make it kinda challenging so players who join my game will be determined to beat down these obstacles in order to win!!
By that way, it will really make up the experience for them though
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But anyways, thanks for your kind reply, and I have understood the problem I’m facing in the game, I’m sure I will modified it as soon as I got the chance…
But the thing is, talking about making a checkpoint system of my own, I have no idea how to make one…
I have seen lots and lots of YouTube roblox basic scripting tutorials, but most of the videos I viewed were the ones that they’l say this:-
Copy the source code, link iin the desc. below
Can you explain to me in detail? That would be helpful😊
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The source code is basically the code you need to do their tutorial. The description is the description, under the video.
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Well, can you show me how to create our own checkpoint system using a normal script from scratch
That would be kind of you😊
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There is a useful one by alvinblox
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I can’t show you but you can figure out how to make a checkpoint by planning how the checkpoint is gonna work and how you’re gonna script it on paper or in a .txt file.
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It’s not bad it’s just a bit too plain for my liking.
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That’s alright, I understand that. I will do my very best at improving it!
Thanks a lot…!
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Thanks for the link… It helps a lot in making all kinds of obbies these days👍
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The obby was great, but on the second stage, the ladder doesn’t seem to function correctly. wont bother to send an image due to already being one
On the third stage, when you fall down to the lava, it doesn’t seem to kill you. Your only choice is to reset your character.
A checkpoint system would make it more easier for people to progress. I really liked this obby, though! The stages were unique from each other with different challenges and obstacles.
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For what it is, I think you have a good start on it. For the third stage, the lava doesn’t kill you if you go down. Also, Roblox has an Obby Template for whenever you go and create a game. They have tutorials on their youtube for you to follow along as well. Keep it up!
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Could you provide screenshots instead?
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Thanks, but the bigger problem for me when creating obbies like these, is that I dont get much visitors to my game. I know that I should try creating a logo for my game as well as attractive thumbnails. But I have no idea how to make one
Can you please tell me how and help me please?
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Sorry to ask, but what do you mean by providing screenshots instead??
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I don’t really know on how to make a logo, sorry. The best you can do is to get help on the forums.
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That’s okay, I will go and check about that myself.
Anyways, thanks for your comment👍
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Your obby is nice, however I must address a few of my concerns. First of all the lobby is pretty simple. I suggest that when you fall your character should reset. That is all I have at this time. I suggest you test all of your stages thoroughly. Otherwise it is great! Keep up the good work!
Respectfully,
Programmxr
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