Roblox GFX *Gazing at the sunrise*

Basically I made a Roblox GFX which is a Roblox character gazing at the sunrise!
I would like to hear your feedback on the Gfx! So i could improve more on making GFX by hearing your opinions! :slight_smile:

(apparently I messed up on the shadows and the angle of the character as well as the sunlight :sweat_smile:)

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Looks great! The right arm to me does not look right. Maybe try making it a little less tilted and put it more on the torso. Otherwise it’s great!

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Alright. Thanks for the feedback! :slight_smile:

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This is cool, but the character is not actually gazing at the sunrise lol. Maybe turn the character so that the shadows are more behind him, then to his side.

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he’s not gazing at the sunrise he’s tipping his hat

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:sweat_smile: Did not notice about the sunlight problem. Thanks for letting me know!

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:sweat_smile: haha literally did not notice the angle of the character as well as the sunlight.

Little to no composition and the lighting is bland

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As for other critique, I fricken love this. You did an amazing job on the lighting and textures. The shadows are perfect too.

Good work!

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I feel like you could definitely work on a better background (the scene is pretty empty). In addition the floor texture has an obvious visible pattern, to make it look more realistic in terms of texture you need to make it so details like scratches are more randomized. Composition is also something you could work on, I suggest you to search up and study the golden ratio or the rule of thirds. You should also be consistent with your style. Your ground is realistic, however your character is not. If you’re going for realism, create some 3D clothing with matching textures for the character, along with using sub surface scattering (sss) for the skin. Could give you more feedback, but that’s all the time I got, good luck on your future works.

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Nature, trees, rocks.
Add those to make your scene not look so empty.
The sunrays looks so bright brighter than the real sun I believe.
Textures look good, nothing is wrong with them.

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