GFX For an upcoming ROBLOX game based on Tom Clancy’s Rainbow Six Siege.
Feedback is really appreciated.
Mine:
Original:
Thanks.
GFX For an upcoming ROBLOX game based on Tom Clancy’s Rainbow Six Siege.
Feedback is really appreciated.
Mine:
Original:
Thanks.
It is awesome! The light is cool, the position is good, everything is fine! Keep up the great work!
Thank you so much for your feedback and kind words Doge, and yes, of course!
Looks great!
Being overcritical (which is always necessary if you want to achieve the very top results) I would say that you should put more emphasis on the smashing of the wall. You see in the original VFX you can see very brightly that someone is smashing a wall, and that the wall is flying into the air? Whereas on your attempt, I wouldn’t know a wall is being smashed without explicitly knowing what I’m looking for.
As I said, being hypercritical but overall it looks really good
Thank you so much for your kind words and suggestion, I really appreciate it, I will try to be more careful about the small details next time, thanks a bunch!
The character seems like they’re struggling to hold the hammer, rather than actually holding it. You could try replicating the hand poses from the original image.
Thank you so much for your feedback, I will be looking forward to improve my poses in the future.
Actually looks really, really nice, keep up the good work.
Thank you so much for your kind words Havoc, and yes, of course!
Looks incredible nice job!
Yeah looks like he can barely hold the hammer. It looks good as long as you only look at your picture. But a side by side comparison to the original makes this unfortunately look bad because ofc the original is beautiful.
Seems like he’s barely holding the hammer. Other stuff is good.