GFX For an upcoming ROBLOX game based on Tom Clancy’s Rainbow Six Siege.
Feedback is really appreciated.
Mine:
Original:
Thanks.
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It is awesome! The light is cool, the position is good, everything is fine! Keep up the great work!
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Thank you so much for your feedback and kind words Doge, and yes, of course! 
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Looks great!
Being overcritical (which is always necessary if you want to achieve the very top results) I would say that you should put more emphasis on the smashing of the wall. You see in the original VFX you can see very brightly that someone is smashing a wall, and that the wall is flying into the air? Whereas on your attempt, I wouldn’t know a wall is being smashed without explicitly knowing what I’m looking for.
As I said, being hypercritical but overall it looks really good
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Thank you so much for your kind words and suggestion, I really appreciate it, I will try to be more careful about the small details next time, thanks a bunch!
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The character seems like they’re struggling to hold the hammer, rather than actually holding it. You could try replicating the hand poses from the original image.
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Thank you so much for your feedback, I will be looking forward to improve my poses in the future.
Actually looks really, really nice, keep up the good work.
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Thank you so much for your kind words Havoc, and yes, of course!
Looks incredible nice job! 
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Yeah looks like he can barely hold the hammer. It looks good as long as you only look at your picture. But a side by side comparison to the original makes this unfortunately look bad because ofc the original is beautiful.
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Seems like he’s barely holding the hammer. Other stuff is good.
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