Roblox Social Game - Player Analytics

Hello,

I own a social game on Roblox. However, it’s analytics are not great, I need some advice on what I could do to improve retention/avg session time etc, I see other social games and they’re not too much different to mine however some have more to do than others.

Pretty much everything needs improving, I need some harsh but helpful advice on how to keep players longer when they first join the game, whether that’s even through a quest system e.g Play for 10 Minutes.

Any help will be greatly appreciated, I’ll link the game below.