Roller Coaster GFX, Constructive Criticism wanted!

Hi! I made my first GFX with multiple rigs today and wanted to know what you think could be improved and what is good! Constructive Criticism wanted!

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I like it! Though, the roller coaster model (the front, especially) could be improved.
Screen Shot 2021-03-11 at 5.57.31 PM

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All in all, I think it’s really good. However, there good be some improvement.

For example, in the characters, there are some weird shadows that kind of make the characters look odd. I would recommend removing the shadows off their face so you can see it better.

Maybe, some effects? Like a trail from the coaster going fast through the track?

The materials are pretty flat. I would recommend messing around with metallic and roughness a bit if you’re using blender. The lighting could be improved a bit by using an HDRI and then the sky could match it a bit better. Good luck on your future work!

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Thanks! That reall helped! I will defintely use that! :slight_smile:

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