Saloon feedback

Hey, today I made a saloon, I hope you guys like it! :smile:

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welcoem to the wild west!!!
i liek it! except why are the bars sticking out the roof in the shade!?

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Because I used a reference, and the reference had the same detail.
The reference:

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Well, it looks VERY off to me…

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Maybe I am gonna remove it.
Thanks for your feedback.

Very cool! Did you model the saloon letters?

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No, I used the plug in “ThreeDText 2” by XAXA.

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Not far off from the reference image to be honest. I would possibly make the saloon slightly wider and work on the windows, but other than that very good!

I didn’t want to copy it 1:1.
Thanks for your feedback.

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To me it looks a lot like the classic roblox saloon.
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Overall I think it looks pretty good! I like it!

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Looks good, but is the shade thing in the front textured? If not I would do wood planks/tiles.

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Very cool and realistic. It looks like the balcony has no door so maybe you should add some doors.

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Fantastic build! Only part that sticks out is the colour of the building itself! Just feel like it’s a little too red/dark, maybe try to match it more with the brown platform that the saloon is on!

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The doors are there, thank you for your feedback.

I like the red/dak look, maybe I am gonna change it.
Thank you for your feedback.

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Very nice build! Couple of suggestions:

  1. The front overhang part looks a bit off, I suggest changing the colour to light brown or something. I know on the reference it was white/grey but I think It’d look better brown.

  2. It count be a lot smoother. It looks kind of blocky. Still looks cool though.

Just a couple of suggestions, you don’t have to listen to them. Just ideas.

Good Job! :clap:

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Thanks for your ideas, maybe I am gonna change a bit.

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There’s nothing wrong with the colour itself, it’s just that the platform with the stairs is a totally different colour! You could also just make the platform a bit more red, that would work too!

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Oh but I am talking the one on the balcony.

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You are right, maybe I should add a door.