San Francisco Street Car

How can I improve my street car?

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Probably add a lot more detail, I don’t want to sound rude but it’s honestly way to plain.

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Like @GreekRootWord said it’s too plain, also add the some wheels and some seats. But so far you are on a good path, keep up the excellent work!

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Your ceiling is very well done. However, the wall and the floor looks too thin right now. Maybe make them thicker.
You should also add some textures/GUIs on the sides, as well as add some wheels on the bottom.

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Well, I live out at SF so I know what cable cars look like. So you should add some poles on the outside so people can hold onto it outside and make a ledge for them to stand on, yes people stand outside of the cars. Were you going with the yellow color because I’ve never seen a cable car like that- There is wheels but they are under the car and mainly it’s being moved by magnets; according to the SF Cable Car Museum. Like everyone else said, you need to put way more detail like put some words chairs,etc. But not every car is the same.

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This was one of the different types I’m also going to be uilding the trolley

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It looks weirdly flat, and some of the pieces don’t really look like they actually connect together.