Script broken. Please help me fix this

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#1

One time tool purchase system not working.
Code: --Hi guys edit the three lines below and this is PharohFlys and make sure to like my model

local Id = 1741305140 --This is the gamepass ID: Example: Red Balloon - Roblox take the number part and put it there
local VipPlayers = {“Conclusiongiver”, “Roblox”} – replace these people one of them is me and put who you want it to get for free
local ToolName = {“ClassicSword”} --replace RedBalloon and put the name of the tool and it needs to be in ServerStorage
–dont edit below unless you know what your doing!
local function FindPlayer(Plr)
for Num, Pler in pairs(VipPlayers) do
if Pler == Plr then
return true
end
end
end

game.Players.PlayerAdded:connect(function(Player)
if game:GetService(“MarketplaceService”):UserOwnsGamePassAsync(Player.UserId, Id) or FindPlayer(Player.Name) then
Player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function(character)
for Num, Tool in pairs(ToolName) do
if game:GetService(“ServerStorage”):FindFirstChild(Tool) then
game:GetService(“ServerStorage”)[Tool]:Clone().Parent = Player.Backpack
end
end
end)

	for Num, Tool in pairs(ToolName) do
		if Player.Backpack:FindFirstChild(Tool) == nil then
			if game:GetService("ServerStorage"):FindFirstChild(Tool) then
				game:GetService("ServerStorage")[Tool]:Clone().Parent = Player.Backpack
			end
		end
	end
end

end)

#2 
local gamepassID = 1741305140 --This is the gamepass ID: Example: Red Balloon - Roblox take the number part and put it there
local vips = {"conclusiongiver", "roblox"}
local tools = {"ClassicSword"}

local function isVIP(player)
    for _, vip in vips do
        if vip:lower() == player.Name:lower() then
            return true
        end
    end
end

game.Players.PlayerAdded:Connect(function(player)
    if game:GetService(“MarketplaceService”):UserOwnsGamePassAsync(player.UserId, gamepassID) or isVIP(player) then
        player.CharacterAdded:Connect(function(character)
            for _, v in tools do
                if game:GetService(“ServerStorage”):FindFirstChild(v) and not player.Backpack:FindFirstChild(v) then
                    game:GetService(“ServerStorage”)[v]:Clone().Parent = player.Backpack
                end
            end
        end)
    end
end)