Personally I think you are a decent builder, I wish you the best of luck with your cafe game especially with all the roblox ads being restricted to certain ages.
The cafe looks really good. But, everytime I see a cafe, I kinda expect more of a modern version instead of just a basic version, its still good, I really like how you added kinda like a neon glow to the restaurant which is definitely what I like.
Overall, very good, but how long have you built in studio?