Second Build Ever, Recreation-Anime builds

I just Finished working on this, it took me like 3 hours because this is my second build to ever be made my first was just a tree and everything you see in there is made by me except the car. You are free to give me any feedbacks to improve on my building.

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Roblox Recreation

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It would be better only if the overall lighting was a bit greenier. This is cool!
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The tree trunks look a bit glitchy and undetailed. Maybe darken the color and remake the texture?

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The car looks like a miniature version of the car. Scaling it up would fox it.

Hello!

First off I’d like to say; Great work! Though here’s a few tips on how to improve your build!

I’d suggest adding little lighting detail’s to make the overall environment POP!, this can be done by simply using, Ambience, Depth-Of-Field, and Future Lighting Settings. Though your build is very nice, it’s a bit bland. Try using more detailed asset’s, thing’s out of a nature pack (No worries, nothing’s wrong with using a few models, though keep it to a minimum to ensure the authenticity of your work!)

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More Detail Suggestions & Information

When scaling your objects, be sure to use a simple NPC, to make sure you have the correct ROBLOX scale in place, to make your build’s pop more.

For the windows, add a glass layer texture, with a .25 transparency rate to give it a nice finishing effect, so the windows won’t be so bright.

Utilize the scaling technique for door’s, windows, cars, Vice-Versa.

With a bit of touch up’s, this build will look perfect!

NATURE PACK
https://www.roblox.com/library/4631562460/Nature-Pack?ViewInBrowser=true&CreatorId=105416473&SearchId=64A44B6C-E5E8-4D76-BD19-D5DB8F2B2A48&Category=Model&Position=2&SearchKeyword=NATURE+PACK&CreatorType=User&SortType=Relevance

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