Second outfit, how did I do?

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#1

Hello!
My name is NicholasMRoosevelt, I recently made a post about the first outfit I made.
Listening to some of your suggestions and watching some tutorials, I’ve made a second outfit.
It’s not an entirely unique design since I based it off of an already-existing outfit, Mr. Rogers’s red cardigan.
This was simply to practice, and I was wondering what tips you guys might have to improve.

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Again, please be constructive with your comments. I’d like to improve upon this.
Also, let me know if this is in the wrong category or if I am breaking any DevForum rules so I can fix it!

Edit: Grammar fixes.

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#2

This looks great! Very detailed and clean.

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#3

This looks great! Especially since this is your 2nd outfit, Keep it up!

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#4

For your second outfit… this is amazing.

Still a lot you can improve over time though.
My advise for now is to make a smooth color variation in the big red areas.

I like the texture. I think at least a few people would buy this already.

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#5

Great for a second clothing design.

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