Hello,
I made this simple render for fun, but still wanted feedback on it. Whats good about it? What needs improving? Etc…
Thanks!
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And yes, I am aware that the knife is a little off.
I like it, but you should upgrade the lighting to make it better.
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Yes, I did have some trouble with that, but thanks!
Okay! Good luck for your next renders.
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Hello. I think the best part of your picture is the shocked expression of the Yellow figure. Personally, that really tells me what is happening.
I think you could probably re-position the figures to make the yellow person further away from your avatar as if they were that close he would be dead by now. Or, you could position the characters so that they face each other.
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Wow! You’ve really improved with your second render. I like it. 
Maybe place the desk farther back since it looks like your character has a ton of pages on his shoulder.
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The character is already dead. The face resembles him being killed and the reason he is yellow, is because that is the kill effect!
Shouldn’t the knife be in his back?
He slashed, he killed, he keep knife 
I get your point but it is hard to tell if he has been stabbed. Anyways, nice thumbnail!
The Background Came Too Dark. 
Great work, what do you use to render? I might have some tips on how to up the quality of the render. 
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The render looks great! I like what you did with the positioning of the players and the colors of the characters. I have a few suggestions, you might want to move the paper, it looks slightly off behind the head like that. The same goes for the distance between the characters, they are so close that he could’ve easily stabbed him already. To increase realism, make the distance a little larger.
All things considered, good job!
the lighting so bad bro did u do this in blender or roblox?
edit: the rest is nice
Personally, I don’t think the lighting is the problem, it’s the quality of the render.
this could look ok if it had lighting, but, it has no lighting, no shadows, no anything … you can make this in roblox… you can even add lighting to this in roblox
I agree that the lighting isn’t exactly 100/100 but the render settings could be improved, for example, in Cinema 4D, using the “Physical” render setting is usually the highest quality.
i dont even see why would you use software like blender, cinema4d… you can make this in roblox
with the same or even better quality
You can but it’s not a render if you haven’t rendered it. You can make the positions in roblox and port it over as an .obj file to get quality like this compared to the one shown above in the post.
