Hello! I am s_1lx. I’m posting for the first time in this DevForum. I’d like to get feedback on a recent GFX that I have made!
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Really nice effects and render however, some issues I would like to point out:
I don’t know but are the wings supposed to have a pixelated white outline on it? Though if you’re going for the glow effect, it looks perfectly good.
Next, the effect near the hand shows a weird image/clip effect? Might have to zoom in to see but yea, feels offputting. Try feathering the effect to make it blend together better.
Lastly, the effects near the hands cover too much making it seem, off? The effect on the other hand seems alright tho 
Overall though, really good render and effect job. However,maybe try making the character cross arms or pose, essentially. Exaggerate til its readable.
Heres something you can try:
Walk faraway, wait for a little, then glance at it very quickly. If you can tell what the character is doing, great job, if you can’t, exaggerate it
Overall, amazing job 
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Something I think you should change is below the hand on the right I’m not sure what it is personally I think it should be fixed or changed. I also didn’t notice the wings until I really looked at the image it could just be that sense most of the background is the same color as the wings it harder to notice or it’s just lighting taking it away that I also think you should change other then that yeah it’s good.
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I think it looks awsome. And I would like to know more context about this GFX. And also because the picture is so bright with all the pink and the white so your eyes dont realy know where to look at so maybe ( Im not sure but ) have some contrast between the white and the pink. But I think it looks great.
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Welcome to the forums! I’ve removed the tag from the title–those can be put in the “Tags” section. 
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Thanks for the feedback on the pose. I was trying to make the render look as if it were hovering, in a sense. I’ll be sure to use your advice!
Thank you for both the reminder and the welcome! I’m glad to be here.
Thanks for the critique. I sort of wanted to make the wings blend in with the effects I made, but I see they’re a little too strong! I’ll be sure to work on this next time.
If you dont mind me asking, how did you make the flames effect? Nice GFX btw.