Hello everyone! I am very excited to show you, my first game! 
I did it with a lot of passion and sacrifice! I heartily appreciate your feedbacks!
If you can give me advice and tips to continue adding content, make the game grow and reach more public, I will be deeply grateful!
Thanks for your time and I hope you enjoy it!
this is really good, especially for your first game. it’s hard to find any flaws. the ui is good, the models are good, and the animations are good.
this game looks well made and has a lot of potential. keep on working on it and it’ll be popular in no time
I thank you very much! seriously.
I really needed to hear that! I hope you have a great day to come!
The UI is great. Animations are GOOD. And I love the logo! Its GREAT for a first game!
<3
i wish you well on your future endeavors.
please can we have multiplayer
and make the pads turn green whenyou can afford them.
just make the guy picking up the stuff from SOMEWHERE and maybe even customer npc (after mall is finished of course).
when you own all the stores in a mall O_O
make an x out button for feedback/bug thingy.
make it have like a smooth tween instead of sudden change on these:
also they are positioned weird:
and progress saves? wow!
Omg, you are helping me a lot! Thank you so much!
Right now I am working to be able to have 3 players on the same server !, and NPCs who buy in each store 
npcs who buy after the store is complete, of course!
also why not more than three players on same server? what happens?
I already read your feedback that you have sent to the game! Regarding the small bugs of the interface, I will fix it soon!
I will also take care that both the decorations and the lights of each store have more importance, as in the future I have prepared different models of stores, (YOU CAN FIND AN ADVANCE / EASTER EGG UNDER THE BRIDGE )
also another gamepass you can add (its op/p2w)
even while you are away from the game, the cash still builds up!
price: 700 robux (or less lol or more)
The reason why I don’t have more than 1 player per map, is because the autosave, although it works perfectly, only saves the progress of a single player and by duplicating the tycoon, this changes the complete system of the game, I am adapting all the important changes, and then I will enable the multiplayer to play with friends and more people!
Also by enlarging the tycoons, I will enlarge the map and more content!
yay! also pls pls pls can i have a .rbxl files of a finished tycoon/mall PLS i wanna make something with it
From now on, I thank you for giving me great feedback on the game! It inspires me to continue, knowing that you liked the game and that others might also like it!
also wat do you mean advance under bridge there is only shoe
also make it so that every time we reset we don’t see the loading screen all over again
I can give you a base file that I make myself from a kit to make my game!
thanks! i want to make a blenedr arts with it@! i tell you when i done.
But do you want a map file? or with scripts?
just the map. why would i want the scripts for a BLENDER project? and also I already said I just want the finished mall (how it looks like once it it is complete).
or I could make a gfx of the map but that would not show anything about the game lol.
lets move this to messages this is getting (already is) off-topic.
Game looks good, if you need or are looking for an investor feel free to hmu.
Thank you! Thanks for the proposal, I’ll think about it!
Very nice job overall! The only place where I would recommend improvement is the thumbnails, as they have an “Adopt and Raise a Cute Kid” vibe and seem a little low effort. Try moving the text on the thumbnails to a corner/side of the frame so more of the image is visible, and use more appealing, eye catching shots such as the sun setting on the skyline or a shot from the ground looking up at the building to exaggerate the size of it and make it look more impressive.
Keep up the great work!
Thank you! I appreciate the detail of the plans !, and I understand your idea! Soon I will apply your advice and change the images!
