SHOPPING TYCOON 2021! | Feedback on my first game!

The reason why I don’t have more than 1 player per map, is because the autosave, although it works perfectly, only saves the progress of a single player and by duplicating the tycoon, this changes the complete system of the game, I am adapting all the important changes, and then I will enable the multiplayer to play with friends and more people!
Also by enlarging the tycoons, I will enlarge the map and more content!

yay! also pls pls pls can i have a .rbxl files of a finished tycoon/mall PLS i wanna make something with it :wink:

From now on, I thank you for giving me great feedback on the game! It inspires me to continue, knowing that you liked the game and that others might also like it!

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also wat do you mean advance under bridge there is only shoe
also make it so that every time we reset we don’t see the loading screen all over again

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I can give you a base file that I make myself from a kit to make my game!

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thanks! i want to make a blenedr arts with it@! i tell you when i done.

But do you want a map file? or with scripts?

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just the map. why would i want the scripts for a BLENDER project? and also I already said I just want the finished mall (how it looks like once it it is complete).

or I could make a gfx of the map but that would not show anything about the game lol.
lets move this to messages this is getting (already is) off-topic.

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Game looks good, if you need or are looking for an investor feel free to hmu.

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Thank you! Thanks for the proposal, I’ll think about it!

Very nice job overall! The only place where I would recommend improvement is the thumbnails, as they have an “Adopt and Raise a Cute Kid” vibe and seem a little low effort. Try moving the text on the thumbnails to a corner/side of the frame so more of the image is visible, and use more appealing, eye catching shots such as the sun setting on the skyline or a shot from the ground looking up at the building to exaggerate the size of it and make it look more impressive.

Keep up the great work!

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Thank you! I appreciate the detail of the plans !, and I understand your idea! Soon I will apply your advice and change the images!

Played the game for a while and I gotta say, you did a good job on your FIRST game! I really have no feedback since it was a fully functioning (and entertaining) tycoon.

However, this title was a liittllee blurry
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Maybe my eyesight is going downhill.

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I gave it a shot, here’s everything wrong I’ve found with it:

That’s a suspiciously large amount of gamepass buy buttons (at a far too high price imo) - I get the impression the game isn’t meant to be much more than a cash grab from those.
Resetting gives you the loading screen again, as well as the mini tutorial.
There isn’t any signs showing what give money and what doesn’t, potentially leading me to buy stuff I don’t actually need.
For the size of the tycoon, the walkspeed is a little slow. Bumping it up or adding a sprint button would be a good idea in my opinion.
The report bug window can’t be closed seperately from the settings menu. Not too much of an issue, I just think it’s a mild annoyance. (But it doesn’t matter, because it gives a 400 bad request upon submitting anyway)

Otherwise, I think it’s a pretty stock standard tycoon game, it’s not bringing anything new to the table.

Quick edit: Buying the shop zone at the end of the carpark costs 3 cash, not sure if that’s a minor typo in code or something.

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Thank you very much for your feedback! Rest assured that it is a pixel error and not your eyes! LOL

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I appreciate your feedback! Regarding the points, I will answer!

Gamepasses: Really, the intention of the game is not the money, but the content, hence why I strive to provide low poly and attractive models, and to create more content over time! The prices were actually set based on the other games, but obviously I’m going to consider lowering them!

Reset Player: I am aware of the bug, but I do not consider it very important at the moment! but I’ll surely fix it!

Tutorial: I will modify the tutorial so that it shows how to really play the player !, showing where to collect the money and others!

WalkSpeed: Consider it, but choose to create a game pass like the other tycoons!

Bug Window: How strange that I gave you that error, since I tried it seconds ago and it works perfectly, it must be that I am in the process of updating the project in the studio, and that can cause failures! But if there is a bug I will fix it! I will also add a Close window button for the BugReport!

Others Bug: I will solve them little by little !

I understand your point of view, that it is another tycoon of the lot, but obviously I will not be able to launch all my imagination of one!, But I assure you that with time it will become more entertaining and full of mechanics to amuse the player!

I THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE FEEDBACK! :wink:

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Level 7 and the first floor done. Hehe boi
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… No feedback it’s pretty much perfect just keep updating this has potential!

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I appreciate your words and I’m glad you liked it! I will keep going!

I think this game is brilliant, especially for your first attempt! Good work!

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