I started working on this game a while ago however have mostly lost interest in it, the game is currently playable however it is not complete, it is a very linear game. I would like to know what people think of it as if the majority of people do not like it, I have other games I would like to work on.
Be honest, you can’t offend me. I am the one asking for criticism and feedback, so please do share your honest opinion
The game currently ends at the point were you are viewing security cameras and you see the car honking at the gate, after that there is no content so don’t say its bugged, it’s just not made past that point
There are some pros and cons I’ve saw while playing the game. Over all I really liked it!
I liked the way you used cutscenes and the camara tweens. The oil fryer tween was really great also. I was looking for the staff room for good 5 minutes
You could add like a small neon sign similar to your restaurant,
I actually did get scared upon clicking somewhere and only then I realised that I’ve clicked on the door, that’s why you need to have some kind of light inside there or on the outside.
Things you could add: Upon interacting to the Character “Alex” aka the other worker the camera could lock onto the Character, I was half rotated when I clicked the door.
You could add some objective points to signal players where should they interact, they could be visible after a few seconds. Or you can use a similar system that doors uses a light that becomes brighter and brighter at the door. So you can know where to exactly go in the start of the match.
The lobby could also be refreshed a bit to match the style in the game. But that can definitely wait the main thing would be the game it self.
The game it self did give me an intrigue to play
All what you have to do is to think of a story and how it ends
Over all I would finish the game even if it’s a demo or anything like that, in life you also need some small achievements!
Thanks, the guiding of guiding the player more and camera locking onto the Alex NPC is something now that you say sounds like a good idea to me so I’ll add that it. For guiding the player I use highlights inconsistently but having them for everything would be consistent and make sense
