Hello, i have created a small showcase which is basically about a cardboard town, I would appreciate it if you guys can give me some feedback 
You can play the showcase here:
Thanks for reading
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This game is very nice it’s very chill. If it’s not finished keep on working on it till you think it’s done treat it like an artwork. My two suggestions are to add a cardboard parking lot and add more types of cardboard. (Also that girl punched me in the face.)
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Greetings, your cardboard-based town is actually well-done and I do say you did an impressive job to make all the models for this to be cardboard.
Though honestly, make your trees in the middle section have a lesser reflective appearance since the tree’s material is resembling cardboard.
In the image, you will notice the tree had a more reflective appearance for the lighting which made it almost look it was made from another material rather than cardboard.
I suggest you fix the lighting on this to make your tree really more look like from cardboard material.
Overall, the quality of the work you have done, is very interesting and really had a good sense of imagination since you based a whole town on cardboard.
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it looks great and unique, but you could add more details into your work like adding more houses and cardboard road to make it like a town.
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Looking good so far. If possible than maybe add a cardboard road too because it looks incomplete for me.
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