Looks great, but:
- on the fifth photo I can see that the railing has different height, not sure if it was supposed to be like that
- I think that your roof is made of glass. Why is there no sun rays/deep shadows inside?
- Look kind of dull, try adding more details (crack some walls, get more assets)
I hope that you’ll add or fix everything that I’ve listed. Anyways, good job on the showcase. Looks beautiful, it sure does.