Showcase My Game :D 2020

Hello friends, I’m a new builder in roblox, I’m still a bad builder, but I try to get it, I’m not a very cool builder, but I make my place in the form of a farm, it’s only the alpha version, soon I will do even better, like it please , do not judge strictly

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I do like barn look. Correct me if I’m wrong I’m pretty sure asking for rating is considered as spam.

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Asking for a rating isn’t considered spam. Although, I feel like this post would go better in #help-and-feedback:cool-creations

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This is only the bottom of the barn, the top there are errors that need to be corrected.

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Well, at the moment the place seems rather empty if your going for a (Farm game) try adding the final addition to the land to get it a better feel. You could add just about anything since there’s hardly anything here. Add some trees, plants, rocks there could be a bunch of things around the land but also a wire fence? A tractor, A farmhouse, A couple silos, A few rocky hills. You also google images to go off of search farmland or equipment and then find what’s missing and start from there?

Surly you can think of more things on your own than just a barn and chicken houses. @Pancake1824 Just asking for a quick “x/10” rating on your build is considered as spam.

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Yes, it will only be in the future, I will finish the plants with stones soon, and I’ll add a couple of screenshots, and evaluate a new one, after that I want to double the place again, I have many plans for the future for this game, it’s only the beginning, but I hope I can make it work out

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I just asked to evaluate the beginning, is it really considered some kind of spam? if so then I’m sorry I don’t know.

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:smiley: Graphics added

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Friends, tell me what else can be added here? Waiting for your suggestions for improvement.

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It’s definitely coming together however I do feel like it’s missing a few things overall I can see some what improvements you’ve made! Great job gathering peoples feedback and thinking of a ways to improve your build, however, I only have a small suggestion, that has already been mentioned before while the buildings looks good.

I feel like there should be some more stacked hay on the side of the building or try making some tractors or equipment to place the stacked hay bales on, I do believe this is the only thing missing on your build and I don’t know if you plan to make more barn props if so I think that would add a nice touch in my opinion.

It’s alright and yes it is spam because you’re trying to get constructive feedback from people on how to improve your build. Just asking for a rating on my build is considered as spam.

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I want to remake the shed and make an entrance to it, and by the way I didn’t think about the idea of hay cool right away, and thank you for your support bro, I will try to make the game more beautiful so that there is relief for the eyes and so on, and I have another idea for changing the landscape, well, first I’ll do the little things and then I’ll move on to more details.

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It’s good, but they look very “free modeled” because some assets do not fit the style.

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Personally I think it looks great! Keep up the good work, looks a lot better when you added the sunrays and extra graphics! :smile:

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I really like the animal meshes, Well done :slight_smile:

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The wall is a stud off, but other than that its a very nice showcase.

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Thanks bro, I am grateful for the support <3

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Thank you, I will try to make a beautiful miracle.

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Night

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please like

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