Simple lobby build

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#1

Simple low poly map for my upcoming story game. This is just the lobby where players will get teleported to the main story game. Bus model by @GlitchyPumkin

Feedbacks are appreciated :grinning:

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#2

perfect lobby for a story game, although usually there are things you can purchase such as a medkit and stuff, to boost you while playing.

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#3

This is just the early state of the game, the boost will be added as time goes on. Thanks for the reply

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#4

Here is some details you can improve on

You can add some pillars here
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The color of the bricks doesn’t look right. You should make them a little lighter than the wall color. For example if the wall is yellow, you should make the color of the brick a little lighter yellow.
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Square parts fit better than cylinders for pathways
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#5

I will work on those right now, thanks for the feedback!

#6

What is the story game about? something about a school?

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#7

A trip story game (School related)

#8

You should also decrease the saturation of the colors of the builds because they are too bright. You can use a colorcorrection in the game.Lighting. Set the saturation to -0.1 if you want

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