Sky scraper build

Hello! I made a skyscraper, its my first BIG build, And I’d like some feedback!

Okay- let me point this out before anybody comments on it~ Yes, I know I messed up on the scaling with the rails, And I will use my avatar to help guide me next time lol.

I also didnt color it because I’m lazy - this only took about an hour so… Well, feedback is greatly appreciated and thanks for reading this.

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for an hour, hmm. its fine for an hour. but if you a bit keep the laziness away, you could make more detail.

i think lighting on the balconies and pushing the window part back about 0.5 (maybe 1, i know they are slightly pushed in already) studs to give the build more shape. overall, it’s not bad for an hour. a little more time, and this could be a very intricate, well-built structure :upside_down_face:

Thanks I didnt do any lighting on the balconies because I want to use it as a background building kinda

Not bad for an hour, I would add a vent at the top of the building and make the windows boxed on the side (second picture) instead of the long ones.

I will tell the true, an hour of work for this is a lot of time; never be lazy when doing a building, model, etc, because this kind of work requieres a lot of dedication and not being deseperated or lazy, when you arent inspired to build or tired, dont do it, because your buildings will be low quality. ALWAYS get a reference image to make buildings, thats what I do and the result is awesome!
Buildings can look cool having small detail, but of course good buildings with a lot of detail are 10 times better, try practicing and you will become the best!

Try adding bushes or plants around the building. Or some type of land around it. Its alright. Good work though:)

The building looks alright it just lacks height and overall color and detail.

The skyscraper looks decent at the start I like the balcony but i’m sure this isn’t add on a (sky scraper from my understanding) the building doesn’t look that attractive i would just work on the colors and details to make it interesting at the start it’s very unappealing, try not to make the building plain make it have a more welcoming feel to it.

I would remove the balcony placed on the building you could place a door and a door frame that isn’t the same exact color or material as the building it kind of blends in with the building plain color scheme.

Maybe a small suggestion could be place objects on the roof vents, wires, doors. As seen in a few images it could give you an idea of what I’m talking about if it’s needed. It’s a good build just needs some improvements here and there.

I wasnt really aiming for a professional build, I was kind of just testing out my skills. thanks for the feedback though! sorry for the lat reply too lol

I’m not really trying to make a professional build, But I will take your advice for the future (sorry for the late reply)

I wasn’t aware on what approach you where trying to accomplish I’m assuming this was just a practice build or something fun to create? Whether approach you where wanting this is just feedback and recommendations you could take in the future just in case you want to improve your build more further. If this was more of a fun build i could see the reason why it was rushed - and looks unrealistic.

Making a build doesn’t need to look or be professional create to your own abilities and see what the end result will be.

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