Small Library build

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#21

The roof looks sorta bland, try adding lights and more of a designed roof. Also there should be windows. Try not to build rooms in a cube type form, some different shapes would be better for walls. These are suggestions for the 3rd picture but let me just say it looks great so far good job

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#22

Just saying that this should go in #help-and-feedback but putting that aside, I have some feedback.

  • it lacks lighting. The place is gloomy and lacks a vibrance because there isn’t a utilization of point lights

  • You could work on adding more detail, as it is really bland and undetailed. You could consider adding stools, desks with computers, art canvases, stacks of books, some coffee, some ceiling lights and wall lights, globe, candles, etc. Here is some inspiration, this masterpiece was made by Buildite.

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  • Perhaps add some beams shining from the windows to make it really nice, but you would need it to be a bit brighter and in the daytime. You should also play around with the ColorCorrection effects, which can be added to lighting, and playing around with the default lighting settings is also highly encouraged.

I hope this helps, thanks a bunch for sharing this with us. Have a wonderful day :happy4:

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#23

Quite unnecessary of me to mention this but I don’t think it’s below average. A few small mistakes doesn’t determine the overall quality of the build, and calling it below average is simply demotivating the creator of the build. Nonetheless this is a good build and there’s always room for improvement

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#24

It would be a “few” small mistakes if it was not so prevalent throughout this build.
If the same errors are made constantly, then we have an issue.
Every chair in this build has the same issues which I listed above.

A few small mistakes add up overtime and decrease the overall quality of the build.

#25

I feel like you’re only worrying about the bad parts of this build in contrast to focusing on what’s good about it. Calling a build below average due to some small mistakes can be really invalid because a below average build in your case SHOULD BE big mistakes that affect the entire build evidently

#26

Again, these are not “small mistakes”.
Mistakes in aligning parts makes any prop or aspect of the build look wonky because there are random blocks jutting out/rendering over one another.

If the developer does not address these mistakes and continues to make them in future expansions on the build, these errors will only add to the decrease in quality of said build.

I have no issues pointing them out in advance for the developer to see so they know not to do this type of mistake again in the future in order to improve the quality of the build.

#28

I overall like the layout and design of the place however it just feels a bit to open and doesn’t hold a lot of detail library tend to have small tables or either study booths consider placing a few of those in your place to make it less empty.

Anyways, I like the lighting and the layout, it matches well. Consider fixing up the lighting as it’s making the place a little dull and lack of lighting. Adding a few objects hanging from the ceiling would add a nice touch sort of making the place feel like an empty library, so I’m not sure if that is what you are looking for (but, the lighting and layout of the library itself due to match different library have hanging lights or booth chairs to make it more unique).

Placing books on the wall shelves will definitely add a nice touch however I’m sure you got that already planned out. Some potted plants instead of chairs everywhere would be nice as well, i would try focusing on the lighting and placing more objects down. However a amount of libraries have more shelves in different areas than open space, in the interior.

I think you did a good job at the moment placing more objects and changing a few things wouldn’t work.

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#29

You should make a stronger theme. It seems like its just very bland. Hopefully you’re reading all these comments, they’re very useful. I’d say to change up the color to correspond the theme. I think those colors do not compliment each other. This is very good though, props to you. : )

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