Please give honest feedback, I want to make it the best I can!
Or if you would rather play it to take a look, here is the link Disqrete's Library - Roblox
Or if you would rather play it to take a look, here is the link Disqrete's Library - Roblox
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I’m not a builder but I think for the most part it looks really great! However, maybe you should add books to the shelves (although you were probably planning on doing that anyway), and add lighting so it isn’t as dark. 
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It looks nice, I’d think some textures might be better to use as it implements more of an aromatic feeling. But overall its great, keep going on with your builds!
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Yep! So far we have six books in stock
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Will do, thanks for the feeback!
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Needs better shadows and lighting, I believe the carpet with the logo “Disqrete’s Library” can be changed up to have a more intricate, eye-candy-esque kind of style. Remove the ladder and add stairs that line up against the wall and turn back towards the door (think of it Like a U bit without the curve).
The assistance room could use a much finer ceiling, and you can use some color variation between the rooms.
Other than that, it’s an excellent build, I’d recommend changing up the size of the labels in regard to where they are respectively, but overall, I believe this game is very good for what it is.
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Thank you for the feedback, I’ll try it out!
Good low poly build, I like the roof beams, and nice touch with the plants on the tables. You could work on adding another level of detail to things like the walls/floors/ceilings and maybe add another type of chair.
I think this belongs in #help-and-feedback:cool-creations though
Thank you! And I will keep in mind to put it in that category for the future, I am new so I am still learning 
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I think the shelves are too empty and the library is very dark. Maybe add some pillows to the chairs?
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Feedback on builds goes in #help-and-feedback:cool-creations, building support is for technical concerns. Please read the category guidelines before posting in the future.
I think there’s too much open space. You could add more tables and lamps and some lights on the ceiling. But I like the design of the tilted ceiling.
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Hello! 
The building itself looks great, however, I see certain parts of it that could be improved! Libraries often give you a more mysterious, kind of dark mood with of course some lighting to be able to read! I’d suggest toning it down just a little and make the lighting more “lively” since it looks kind of dull. There’s not much to say about the design itself since it’s very nice, however I do not seem to find enough shelves! I do see certain to the sides however I’d also try adding some other shelves, or even some hallways with books.
Example:
Shelves
Other than that, I think it’s a pretty good and quite modern library (I’m more of a medieval type, which is why I suggested a more spooky lighting - of course, it’s up to you so feel free to mess up with the properties!
Good luck!
The seats are actually big make them a little smaller which suits the best for a roblox avatar it might look better with more books and lights I’d love to see the final version of this library
The books are empty because I still need authors to write some books, but yea I will definitely add some more detail to stuff like that
Im really sorry, I am new and I saw a few other posts about this topic here. But I will keep that in mind, thank you! 
Looks very empty, if it’s a library, add some books or shelves not just chairs to sit on. And + it looks very oldish, make it seem like colorful and such.
Yes! I do have an upstairs finished with rows of shelves, I am keeping that blocked off for now since there are barely any books. I will definitely work on the lighting as well, thank you!
There are a few books, we just need some more authors to write books for us. I am also planning on having a game room and some fan art on the walls, so I’m hoping that they will give a little more to do. As for the main room, I am not too sure yet. And for the color I will keep it in mind, thank you!
Feels very empty, the bookshelves really do this.
The build looks below average due to the lack of details and numerous alignment errors within the models present.
The arms of the chairs don’t connect with the back
The chairs are also levitating off of the ground
The wooden support beams aren’t even aligned properly
There are blocks overlapping in this area which causes them to render over one another, hence the improper woodgrain clash.
There are these invisible walls everywhere which make no sense.