Small map feedback

I built some small map in around 2.5 hours and I would like some feedback on it.

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It reminds me of a military RP game’s training area, good job.

One thing that I noticed is that some of the planks are levitating off the ground, try to fix that.

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You should make the baseplate smaller so the game really focuses mainly on the build. Also could you clarify on what this build is suppose to be based on as I’m confused of what it’s suppose to be, but to me it looks like a breaching course for a military.

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I agree with @21stPsalm on a comment he had made about the purpose of this build. It would be very nice to include in this post of what the purpose of this build is and what you want this build to be when it’s finished. Overall not bad of a setup, I do however recommend adding more detail to the map. Maybe crates, ladder models, and shelves as well as maybe debris. Keep this up and post updates here, I’ll like to see updates you make to this :slight_smile:

Thanks for the feedback! I will make the baseplate smaller so the game focuses more on the build.

Also, since most people are asking, this game was supposed to be something like a small fps map example I made.

Sorry for the confusion!

should be fixed now, I moved most to lower positions

I have added some things like crates, ladders, dummies, etc.

I shrunk the baseplate and the starter character a little bit too.

Reply if you find any errors in the map and I will try to fix it!