Hello! Usually I create art for the Roblox platform, but occasionally I’ll build. I made this little showcase back in 2019, and was looking to gain feedback on what I can improve! (All of these screenshots were taken with graphics set at 1, which doesn’t look too different from 10, honestly.)
Most of it was purposefully blocky, I didn’t want to use any other shapes. You can test the actual game out here: Maia’s Office
Any feedback/criticism is greatly appreciated!
Hey, I like the art style and the build looks very nice. Keep up the good work.
Too peaceful and realistic. I love it, well done @malarkey.
Hi, your office on the image you posted in your topic looks good, and it’s scene is looking a little bit realistic due to the fact an office should look dull.
Though I would recommend if you could make your office glasses have a reflective appearance, to make it more pleasing for it’s window appearance.
In all, I appreciate your office and I find it very interesting because of your design and detail you have applied towards your office.
In my opinion, this is a very nice and spooky house.
Like the style, etc. It seems good
super awesome! hope there’ll be more added to this
This looks amazing, really nice ambiance to it. Maybe try implementing some meshes for things like the hat to make it less blocky. Still really nice build.
It looks like you’ve made this not for roblox . It’s too good ! Good job !
I love it! But you could put more things on the notice-board. Not every notice-board is this clean. 
Everything looks great, aside from these. 
This looks like it is supposed to be a hat or something, but isn’t very clear. To be a bit picky, the lamp is a bit too blocky.
Nice.Make a showcase game called office.
Ah, thank you! I think I had tried to put up glass at some point but I’m not sure why I didn’t, I think I had rain particles outside that wouldn’t show through the material. I’ll probably try it again, because it would look much better with it, lol.
Also thank you to everyone else! I’ll try to implement a lot of what you guys have suggested- especially fixing the hat and notice board, I remember being frustrated with the dumb hat, haha. I need to learn Blender now…
