So this was the first time I've made hair in blender but how does it look?

[uniicefairy (Amara)]

It’s not fully complete yet because I’m trying to work on the texture but any tips or feedback would be great.

[GolgiToad]

Very crisp and a great look! I’m concerned how the long hair in the front will clip on the no neck avatar bodies. Also, watch your triangles. This is a very easy method to go over the limit!