Hi guys!
My friend has been working on a game called “Projectile City!” which is a game in which you are able to throw certain objects e.g. bottles and do all sorts of stuff around the city such as driving cars. I would like to see what you guys think of the game and possibly give any suggestions on what could be added or improved. Thanks!
Here are some screenshots for those who can’t enter:
A small note: Next time please increase the world light brightness, because it’s very very dark upon first playing. The rest is pretty okay, and i didn’t expect it to be first person, since throwing stuffs usually need 3rd person to aim properly (at least for me)
Thanks for the feedback! and I will notify him to do that.
Add some textures
Add some UIs, currency intro. the game looks blank
Add some music its too quiet.
as @TrickyTunamers said increase the brightness
I couldn’t enter but based on the screenshots you provided, i see you didn’t choose to make the game realistic but rather cartoony, like most kids like to play today.
However you can’t add realistic lighting to a cartoony game, it’s bad when looking at it and people will be less attracted to keep playing when they join. It’s like mixing chocolate with ketchup, just doesn’t work.
Other than that, i think it looks sick! You may just add more buildings and little bit more details.
Thanks for the feedback and yes I will pass it on to my friend.
Yh, I agree that the lighting doesn’t suit the cartoony style of the game. I will also tell him that. Thanks!
Really, really perfect!
Nice Builds
I like the cartoony feel of your hangout I think it looks great, overall I do like to give you a few recommendations that you could add to your hangout area. My main issue with the hangout is that the lighting is a bit dull most of the areas such as the (buildings) the doors are very hard to see I can’t tell if you could go in or not consider adding more lighting. However, I like the early sunlight.
It’s a pretty decent hangout place and I hope this one gets better! Something I would recommend adding is any environment, plants such as a variety of trees, grass, mushrooms, booths, tables, etc. Just to give the land more detail to it because it’s pretty empty in different parts of the land I would try adding some details throughout the map.
I am not entirely sure if you have already planned, but placing some lighting on the building or signs could possibly improve it due to the amount of the buildings being closed looks alright as it’s not a big issue. Other than that I love the structure and details on the building nicely done.
Thanks for the feedback! I will pass it on to my friend.
I like your friend’s style, looks great overall.
I had to close the game because I tried to use the wrecking ball, but jumping to get out of the seat made me stuck in the roof of the control room. Also, the wrecking ball crane rotates crazy fast.
The side of town with the ferris wheel and wrecking ball is way more interesting – the other side of town feels kind of boring in comparison. I’d recommend putting a couple things over there to make it more fun to move around vertically, maybe something like an observation tower (like the Seattle Space Needle) or some jump pads that let you quickly jump up onto / over the buildings.
I had the same problem with the crane as well and I will tell him to fix that. I also agree that there needs to be more activities to do to make the game more fun overall. Thanks for the feedback!
Hey. I played your game for about 5 min. When I joined, my head was glitched and kept looking up and down really fast and I looked insane. The cars need a little more design to them. I tried to get in a car but when I walked close, they disappeared for a sec and the wheels suspended, I think I touched the front of the car and died. maybe this is a mechanic that you can run people over but you should improve on this, also it’d be a little bit OP. I’m not sure how fun throwing projectiles is as a whole game, so maybe you could add to it more. I went into the hospital and the gap between the wall panels are slightly off in some places. The buildings are actually pretty nice, some small things I’d point out is the 3D text on hospital and other should be updated to have different fonts and make it come out less. To me, your game feels like it’s missing something but I can’t exactly tell you what. It felt more like a map from a game than anything and to me it feels like a cartoony version of “The streets” (though I don’t know why) hope this helped
Thanks for the feedback! We are planning on revamping the map so all these issues should be fixed.
