While i was animating for @Onkori . I would want to see your thought about the animation
Apologize in advance if i post in the wrong topic
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Well Congrats! Those are pretty cool animations, but there can be always improvements right? Here are some that I would implement:
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Try to make them more natural, what I mean is to add some points were the character is slower, and other points were it’s faster.
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If you are looking for intermediate animations those are pretty neat, but for example look at Falco animations, they’re amazing. Try to get inspired by his animations and others too.
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Always be original
Hope this helps and sorry for my english 
(this is the right category)
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k thanks for the submission, i train my animation skills now
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The animation isn’t very exciting. Its pretty blunt. I feel like more key frames are needed for a more sharp and natural looking animation. Also I feel like they need to be faster too. But not bad for a start. Keep up the great work!
The second video: It looks like he’s doing a twirl move rather than doing a spin-slash type of move, I don’t see a lot of the animation on the hand and the sword.
The third video: It looks like as if you got a big hammer and then knock his head, bonk…
It needs to look more of a up-to-down slash
In the second animation, when in it ends, it ends rather abruptly because the hand kinda teleports back to the start position. I would say to fix that, but other than that it looks nice. I’m not really good at animating, so I can’t find anything else that might need improvement.
It’s so well made! I like it!
Maybe add more animations!
As animator, I suggest trying out Moon Animator Suite. It’s a good program with a couple of more eases added to it.
Animations could be more smooth.
Give the swings more force to it so it looks like the player is actually slicing a watermelon, not patting it.
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I know it’s R6, but I don’t feel like finding R15 animations somewhere on my folder.
Keep working and practicing on animating, maybe someday, you will be the best animator ever in ROBLOX!!!
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