Speed Showcase That I Made in 2 Hours

Disordinance · January 19, 2021, 6:29pm

Hey! I made this last night on a whim.

Took Approx 2 Hrs.

Got any thoughts?

Please take the time to check it out instead of just looking at the images. ( Looks best on full graphics )

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Let me know how it looks!

(Sorry for the extremely small walkable area)

Crazedbrick1 · January 19, 2021, 6:59pm

The build looks pretty good overall. I will list some things to point out.

The sun is very bright and large. Tone it down a lot more.
There’s no evidence that this was a bird cage try adding some bird houses or feathers around.
I would build a physical gate instead of a invisible wall.

Overall, this is very good for two hours. I’m a pretty slow builder myself.

Disordinance · January 19, 2021, 7:11pm

Thanks! I’ve been planning of doing all three of those, I just needed to hear it from someone else

B0d · January 19, 2021, 7:44pm

I’d maybe tone down a bit with the effects, like:
1.Maybe but less DepthOfField as it’s good but I find a bit too much of it in the game
2. Tone down the sun as it’s bright
I’d also suggest adding more areas to explore as the exploration is limited, I’d maybe make some secret tunnel or something.
Overall great work!

zukirenji · January 22, 2021, 3:47am

The game is pretty nice, maybe add some better lighting efffect. and turn down the blur a little. also maybe add future lighting, with lights around the map. something like i’ve been working on for a year. and 2 months!

great job!