SPIDER MAN - far from home GFX-opinions

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#1

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I hope you like it and think this gfx takes me 1 hour what it takes to do the blender and material

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#2

Great Gfx! here is my suggestions.

  1. You should try rendering your Gfx sample more to get those dark particles on the characters. Body and clothes of!
Particles

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Spiderman

  1. The buildings on the side has. A lot of white colored areas on them as seen on the picture you should fix that!!
White Areas

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  1. And on Spiderman! try removing those white lines on the characters clothes. And i would fix the road i see a light blue glow on it…!

Anyway, great work your Gfx hope to see more soon!

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#3

For the quality I see from you, this graphics seems rushed.

  • The characters, and image as a whole, look stretched out.
  • The characters are standing still in an unnatural position.
  • The sun next to the character with a cape looks entirely synthetic/modified, and does not blend in at all.
  • The effects seem poor suggesting multiple themes.

P.S. you shouldn’t advertise this on your portfolio as it can be misinterpreted to indirect profiting from stolen content/infringed intellectual property.

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#4

Pretty decent GFX overall…

My only minor complaint is that Spider-Man looks a bit thinner compared to the regular Robloxian rig, which can be noticed mainly from the mask.

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#5

friend esque in the mask of spiderman use the one of roblox 2015 sorry :;c

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#6

No, it’s not the mesh of the mask that’s the issue, it’s that it’s a bit thinner compared to the Robloxian head from a regular rig.

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#7

Great design! I really like it. To make it even more fascinating, you can add overlays that say catchy things like “New!” and etc.

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