So I have a “finished” and unfinished build. I wanted to show them to you:
The Scavenger (Unfinished)
The Scavenger is a fan-made star destroyer (by me) and I built it as a lego. Now I want to build it on Roblox as a cruiser for the Inquisitors from Star Wars Rebels.
The simplicity of the builds makes them look very cartoony, especially with the light blue windows. Surprised you were able to do that in studio and get it that neat, well done!
Try to advance more with complex shapes and unions! You have your basic shape now, which will make it a lot easier to improve the shape of ships later. If you used blender you could make even more unique shapes that replicate shapes from the movie. The blocks already give you a basic shape of the ship and now you can just build upon that!
So far Its a great start and has some promise! Glad to see what you work on in the future!
Being a Star Wars genre developer for a while now, I do like your enthusiasm with the genre on Roblox. Your builds look more like low poly models. The Star Destroyer would look decent high up in the sky as a background “image” for somebody to view from below. If you plan on ever using it where others may view it up-close, I’d add significantly more detail to it.
So I noticed a few things looking at these. First, the bridge. The bridges on star destroyers are at least several stories tall, and do not contain a noticeable viewport or window. They are also bigger than they should be and lack a bit detail. The bridge on a standard imperial star destroyer is about 1/3 the width of the ship, maybe a bit smaller.
Also keep in mind while modeling star destroyers are massive, 1,600 meters or a mile long for an I-class star destroyer.
Your ship also isn’t wide enough, star destroyers are a wider triangle shape. Here’s a picture I made comparing your model to an actual star destroyer. There’s also a photo of the bridge, adding the shapes on top might help give more detail to your bridge.