Start screen isn't quite there yet

I am by no means a UI designer, it feels like there’s something missing ik the text is hard to see but white text is way to bright. I want it to have a medieval vibe and be dark and almost creepy. Tell me what you think.

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Maybe try a white or grey outline around the text, that would make it more visible while not being too bright.

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I think to fit with the camera shake, a small amount of text shaking wouldn’t be horrible. And also as @alight_hedgehog mentioned, an outline around the text (or something like a frame; wood, possibly?) could be added to make the dark text more visible on the dark background. And the left side of the screen feels a bit empty.

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yeah i think i might add more models to even it out, i like your idea of the frame it would probably work well

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Its not amazing and I’ll definitely change it later

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Maybe change the font for now?

Yeah, you should totally use custom image GUIs and not plain text.

doesn’t look like buttons. just looks like things on a board

Yeah. What I was suggesting was a board for each one, making it look a bit more clickable.

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