I saw some things that weren’t mentioned that I thought could really improve your game, and so I wanted to add that.
Ok so I’ve revamped lobby, you may check it out.
One of these instantly kills the player, one doesnt.
Which one is it?
You cant tell the difference, bad choice on your -part
Fine I’ll create a particle for the kill brick if that’s what you want.
HALP
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absolutely rotten my eyes hurt maybe work on fun and graphics. Kid, you have wrecked my day.
If anybody is going to reply on how they cant get to dark red, im rebooting it.
I’m also an obby builder with about a year and a half of experience and here’s my review!
Stage 1
Second, it bugs me how they aren’t perfectly alligned! I know things aren’t prefect, but it looks like it was just thrown in there.
If you zoom in, the middle one isn’t directly in the center. I know it seems like I’m complaining about everything, but just make it so it is in the center a little more.
vs
The part is off by it looks like 0.25 studs. Maybe move it so it is not off. Because the other side doesn’t have this slightly off allignment.
Stage 2
There’s nothing really wrong in my opinion about stage 2.
Stage 3
These area really hard to see, make them a little brighter!
UI / Extras
As someone already said…
First of all, the UI and the text design is just… Ugly. It’s obvious you just used a bunch of free models, which normally I don’t mind (like the spectate model), but the lack of care in at least changing things up a bit annoys me a lot.
There are a lot of free models! I am fine with games that have free models for the UIs and stuff, but when they’re all not the same color or colors that match, it is kind of annoying. It looks like they were thrown in there. Maybe make them the same color or colors that match the colors you want?
And as someone already said…
It makes it more obvious you used free models considering when you look in the developer console, it looks like the game is consistently trying to sell me a gamepass, most likely a scam. I’ve looked into it, and the UserID’s inventory looks like this.
There are so many free models and you can tell because if you open up the developer console, you can see that it has an error and it’s trying to sell me a game pass which is most likely a scam.
Conclusion
This is where I left off because the game was flat out impossible at the end of stage 3 because the jump is nearly impossible and hard to do. And the game was just not enjoyable. The music was not that good.
Over all thoughts: I did not like this game.
Rating: 0.5/10.
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And you did not look at seperate XD!
How do you look at the dev console?
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Go to the chat and type “/console” or press F9.
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Fixed ui design on the actual game if you play it.
Oh okay. I understand if you don’t like it. I’ll try to do so next time to make it better. Also please play the normal version…
Yeah bro sinclosed your obby is like 7/10 because uh kinda rigged and fnf music but love idea thanks ok bye --your bestie
Thank you new ryan plays, archimendes actually works!
Hello NewRyanPlays,
Your request to making the game fun has been accepted.
Q: Why am I getting this message?
A: Your request has been accepted, and the impact that your request has made to our game is high and may cause to renew all of the stages inside of The Maybe-Possible Obby.
Your Impact was: Very High
Your request was highly agreed on that we decided to reboot the entire game and make it better.
Thank you, and happy building!
Regards,
SinClosed.
(P.S. You may check the game out only from stages Lobby - Orange on Update 3.1, and You weren’t accepting any messages so we decided to reply to you in our topic.)
- says the guy who made a game with a 1 line script that just detects your username
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Was this an attempt to bump a post? this seems kinda random unless this is supposed to be a devlog 2_?
When you use absolutely horrible and terrible, it’s as if you’re implying that were basically praying on this games downfall which is defiantly not what’s happening, Ryan was a bit harsh, but he is giving constructive criticism which is supposed to be blunt which he was.
You should finish the game first then, unless you were just showcasing the first stage and asking for that though.
This is completely offtopic and was really not needed =/
Thats devforum gossip alone from what your saying.
Im not one to speak on a 1d conversation that is in the past but, Im not sure if you did this because you were mad but, why did you ealier feel personally offended and then say it to him?
This was bluntly disrespectful and unneeded, he wants constructive criticism and you gave him dirt.
keep things like these personal to yourself.
This is offtopic and this just looks like your posting again, but…
From what you said, don’t take everyones responses as a bad thing, most of us are attempting to give you a blunt review and say how they really feel. They are made for you to improve and make better content.
Don’t take this personal, kid.
Im happy your replying this and I hope he doesn’t post something like that again, Im not sure, but I think he got mad at a review and is trying to re-direct it.
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I don’t know I can’t keep track of your replies to each picture… Anyways this is off-topic