Hi! I’ve made this new obby called The Maybe Possible Obby, and I’d like to get some feedback.
Here’s the game: [STATUS UPDATE!] The Maybe-Possible Obby Reboot - Roblox
Update: Added a stats Gui
Features:
-Username
-Deaths
-Stage Name
-Rank
-Account Age
I think your game is a nice obby
I rate it: 8/10
The game was great!
Mabye give the player some more WalkSpeed and JumpPower to make it even better!
7/10
That would be better but I made it walkspeed 16 and jumppower 50 for modifiers in next stages. Thanks though for your suggestion and your feedback! Next time try putting your suggestions in the suggest box.
the game is great
8/10 because…
the menus are too basic and none are the same, I propose to lighten the black menu with a dark gray and make each menu have the same style.
the kill bricks are a little too strong, making them darker is better for the eyes.
I noticed that you use an Admin, maybe make it invisible to others.
it’s not very important but small details to correct.
But I like it because it’s hard and long so it challenges the player to resuscitate.
And sorry for my English I’m still learning to speak English
Thanks for your 4 advices! (I might accept them)
I’m an obby builder with a year of experience, and here’s my review.
Spoiler: I do not like it at all
First of all, the UI and the text design is just… Ugly. It’s obvious you just used a bunch of free models, which normally I don’t mind (like the spectate model), but the lack of care in at least changing things up a bit annoys me a lot.
It makes it more obvious you used free models considering when you look in the developer console, it looks like the game is consistently trying to sell me a gamepass, most likely a scam. I’ve looked into it, and the UserID’s inventory looks like this.
Stage 1 is, simple, like it says, but it’s also very boring. The random switch from 2d to 3d text is also inconsistent. The repetitive jumps above the lava is also really boring and just lazy, with the inconsistent spaces in between the jumps just showing it.
Here’s the extremely apparent design problems in it.
The sizes are, imma say it again, inconsistent. The left of it isn’t even correctly sized, it’s off the ledge by about 0.1 studs. In the 2nd image, it just shows even more incorrectly sized parts.
This truss section is so off, Why are the trusses so far apart?
This is just laziness. The font just changes, for some reason, and the distance between the parts is just so random. Not to mention, the lava part isn’t even aligned.
Terrible attempt at trying to make a curve. Use this to make curves in the future. Also just an entire walking section.
It’s nothing much different, more extremely basic jumps.
are you trying to kill me with boredom or something. at least make your jumps more advanced than what ever this is
not to mention, its also very lazily built. Shocker?
The only exciting and creative part of the obby. Ride an unanchored ball, it’s exciting and actually spices up this snoozefest.
Why is there still FNF music. Please choose music that actually fits the game. My god.
We got more basic jumps, EXCEPT! EXCEPT THEY’RE FORCEFIELD BALLS! Wow! Also, why is there just a floating ball down there?
What’s the point of this? You can just skip it.
A billion headhitters. So fun and exciting and innovative (sarcasm). Once again, PLEASE try to make your obstacles actually interesting.
This hard to spot instant kill brick is annoying and frustrating, which may be the point of this obby. In that case, it’s succeeding way too well. However, I’d like obbies to be more fun than turning me into a wild chimpanzee out of rage. This is just… why?
This killbrick spinner is very obviously scripted, which is not good, especially for users with high ping. PLEASE use a better alternative like CylindricalConstraint.
At least there’s a sight of wrap arounds, and they’re not too bad but they’re not creative whatsoever. The insta kb wrap around feels kinda random too.
Another thing is the constant misalignments… Agh.
Stage 4 is where I just quit. I know what I’m getting myself into, a constant loophole of unfun gameplay and stuff that will just drive me insane. Here’s some tips:
Actually care about the game. It’s very clear this was very carelessly made, every stage looks like it was whipped up in about 2-5 minutes.
There are so many free models that it doesn’t even feel like you’ve been developing for 5 minutes, despite your bio saying you have been for 2-3. I think with that experience, you’d be able to actually create something decent.
If I have anything to say, I gotta say no matter how much you pay me I wouldn’t continue playing this.
I can’t believe the people in this ever dared to give this at least above a 6/10. Sorry if I was too harsh.
0.25/10
Actually your kinda right, but I didnt carelessly created it. Besides obbies like these don’t need to be fancy, just take the Impossible Obby for example. And those were the basic stages. I also pre-released this game and I’m not even done so thats the part where I’m gonna decorate it. Also, if you wanted to put suggestions, try doing so on the suggestion box. Thank you, I’m not mad, a little too harsh, but thanks for taking the time to play my game. (took me >1 year to create it)
Pink stage Lol:
Hey, the ratings are based on what you think about the game.
Sooo, I’m going to go over the ratings you give and what those ratings tell me how good my game is.
0-1 (Absolutely horrible, try making another one because there are so much things wrong already.)
1-3 (Terrible, you could’ve done a million things to make your stages fun, and, well, it’s too basic and players would get bored immediately.)
3-5 (It’s cool and all, but it could be better.)
5-7 (I love the design of the obby but I think you couldve added a little bit more stuff.)
7-8 (This game was splendid and it amazed me so much because of the fun stages but there are some stages that make the player confused or unaware. Other than that, excellent work!)
8-10 (This is one of the best obby games that is out there on roblox! There are no things you need to fix because it’s already as good as it is!)
Although his review was a bit harsh, I would first fix all the of the things that @aubreamber stated in his review. He has experience, and knows what works well.
Add some innovative designs! It’s all too simple. There’s loads of these obbies out there, you need to make yours different and unique for it to really gain popularity.
Thats the least of my priorities. I save decoration for the last.
I need to finish building Pink, Pastel Pink, White, Light Grey, Dark Grey, Black, and Final first.
I don’t mean the decor. I mean the jumps, the main thing players join for. The stages need to be innovative, once again like the previous review by Ryan said.
I would personally improve your current stages before adding more. People aren’t even gonna make it to Pink if they don’t enjoy the previous ones.
0.5/10 while i appreciate you are trying to make it not a cake walk insta killbricks never make fun gamplay
also there is way too much walking
Alright, Alright! I have read enough suggestions and I’ve decided to reboot my stages. I’ll make new stages tomorrow or later.
Everyone could do a game like that. That’s just basic building.
No joining now, testing is allowed
You shouldn’t say that as goalmwo replied with your username tracking game.
