[STATUS UPDATE!] How good is my obby game? Any Feedback?

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#24

Just played this game with my sister, definitely a very frustrating experience.
Before I start making my critique I’d like to say that I’ve been scripting for a year and I know a thing or two about game design.

First thing- Thumbnail- It doesn’t advertise anything about your game, it doesn’t invoke curiosity, nor does it show me what to expect. I just see a purple face.

Second thing- GUI- Its messy, it feels like you just used a bunch of free models because the style doesn’t feel like it matches at all.

Third Thing- The lobby- Actually, generally all your building is boring, there’s nothing that really catches the eye, creates a boring environment, and quite frankly the arrows are very “cringy.”

What I liked about your game:
The music was kinda good, I don’t like FNF because its really overused but it was nice to listen too while struggling through every stage, and also the spacey build kind of thing.

Personally I think you need to revamp the entire game, rebuild it from scratch. The gameplay is really really flat. The walking, the jumps, in some cases I just held down W and pressed the spacebar every and then.

I give it a 3/10
I’m sorry I try to be positive a lot of the times because I understand how hard it is to keep up the motivation, but I really struggled to find anything I really enjoyed about this game. I’d like to ad that I am almost an adult at this point and I go very in depth into game design that most ROBLOX players won’t care about.

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#25

Bruh you just played my game when I said I was rebooting it—

#26

I saw some things that weren’t mentioned that I thought could really improve your game, and so I wanted to add that.

#27

Ok so I’ve revamped lobby, you may check it out.

#28

One of these instantly kills the player, one doesnt.

Which one is it?
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You cant tell the difference, bad choice on your -part

#29

Fine I’ll create a particle for the kill brick if that’s what you want.

#30

HALP

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#31

THIS TOO: How to make a spinner that rotates on Client?
:frowning:

#32

absolutely rotten my eyes hurt maybe work on fun and graphics. Kid, you have wrecked my day.

#33

If anybody is going to reply on how they cant get to dark red, im rebooting it.

#34

I’m also an obby builder with about a year and a half of experience and here’s my review!

Stage 1

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Second, it bugs me how they aren’t perfectly alligned! I know things aren’t prefect, but it looks like it was just thrown in there.

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If you zoom in, the middle one isn’t directly in the center. I know it seems like I’m complaining about everything, but just make it so it is in the center a little more.

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The part is off by it looks like 0.25 studs. Maybe move it so it is not off. Because the other side doesn’t have this slightly off allignment.

Stage 2

There’s nothing really wrong in my opinion about stage 2.

Stage 3

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These area really hard to see, make them a little brighter!

UI / Extras

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As someone already said…

First of all, the UI and the text design is just… Ugly. It’s obvious you just used a bunch of free models, which normally I don’t mind (like the spectate model), but the lack of care in at least changing things up a bit annoys me a lot.

There are a lot of free models! I am fine with games that have free models for the UIs and stuff, but when they’re all not the same color or colors that match, it is kind of annoying. It looks like they were thrown in there. Maybe make them the same color or colors that match the colors you want?

And as someone already said…

It makes it more obvious you used free models considering when you look in the developer console, it looks like the game is consistently trying to sell me a gamepass, most likely a scam. I’ve looked into it, and the UserID’s inventory looks like this.

There are so many free models and you can tell because if you open up the developer console, you can see that it has an error and it’s trying to sell me a game pass which is most likely a scam.

Conclusion

This is where I left off because the game was flat out impossible at the end of stage 3 because the jump is nearly impossible and hard to do. And the game was just not enjoyable. The music was not that good.

Over all thoughts: I did not like this game.

Rating: 0.5/10.

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#35

And you did not look at seperate XD!

#36

How do you look at the dev console?

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#37

Go to the chat and type “/console” or press F9.

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#38

Fixed ui design on the actual game if you play it.

#39

Oh okay. I understand if you don’t like it. I’ll try to do so next time to make it better. Also please play the normal version…

#40

Yeah bro sinclosed your obby is like 7/10 because uh kinda rigged and fnf music but love idea thanks ok bye --your bestie

#43

Thank you new ryan plays, archimendes actually works!

#44

Hello NewRyanPlays,
Your request to making the game fun has been accepted.
Q: Why am I getting this message?
A: Your request has been accepted, and the impact that your request has made to our game is high and may cause to renew all of the stages inside of The Maybe-Possible Obby.
Your Impact was: Very High
Your request was highly agreed on that we decided to reboot the entire game and make it better.
Thank you, and happy building!
Regards,
SinClosed.
(P.S. You may check the game out only from stages Lobby - Orange on Update 3.1, and You weren’t accepting any messages so we decided to reply to you in our topic.)

#45
  • says the guy who made a game with a 1 line script that just detects your username
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