Story game logo feedback

Hello!

My name is skateborden and I’m currently working on a story game. The story game will take place in a server hall. I have little to not experience creating GFX and all of that UI stuff (except for in studio). I would gladly appreciate any feedback on this logo for the game. I think that it’s a bit too simple in some aspects but too complex in other aspects. This is my first try and I’m using Inkscape to create it.

Here is it:

Thanks in advance /skateborden

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Just my opinions:

  • the title should be smaller, and fit inside the back space
  • the background… white & empty, should be changed
  • sides [white space] are too big. Icons are supposed to be 512 by 512 (make sure it wont cut off the middle area)
  • the servers themselves look off, like its too plain & empty
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Thank you for the response. I will be using your feedback to perfect it :slight_smile: .